When your novel is scattered across the road

Literally. Because I just spent the last hour scouring the road for pages of my novel (they’d been scattered across the road after I set my manuscript on top of my car’s roof and drove away). What is more, this happened in Lynn Haven. I live on the beach–thirty minutes away. I drove all the way home, got the kids settled for bed, put on my pajamas, and was getting ready to watch basketball and play a game when I felt like something was off. Something was missing. I couldn’t figure out what. I began walking mindlessly around the house, until I remembered what it was–my manuscript, bound in a blue three-ring binder.

Crap!

“Kids!” I shouted to them upstairs. “We gotta go back into town. My novel is missing.”

How do you lose your novel? Well, in my case … spectacularly. We drove thirty minutes back into town only to find pages scattered all over the place, blowing in the wind, or stuck to the asphalt with tire marks marring the once crisp paper. My heart plummeted to my stomach when I saw the sight.

Now, I must say I didn’t lose my novel. The manuscript is backed up digitally across multiple storage systems. But I had printed the entire work to make edits and mark-ups. It’s one of my most critical editing stages. During the process, I make corrections, identify clunky sections, rephrase sentences, and add notes which help make the story more fun and suspenseful. Basically, if I couldn’t recover the novel I’d lose over a month’s worth of work–and all my creative input to boot.

While my children waited in the car, I turned on my bright headlights and waded into the street, ankle-deep grass, and a deep ten-foot ditch to recover my pages. I scraped my feet on thorns (I was still wearing my pajamas and flip flops), and I hiked the street searching for my missing binder. A couple of neighborhood folks saw me, and they came out with heavy duty flashlights to help me look. How awesome are people?! Talk about good Samaritans.

Sadly, we didn’t recover my binder. The stack of papers I recovered felt like about half of what the novel should’ve been. One of the good Samaritan’s mentioned he saw someone picking up papers about twenty minutes before I’d arrived. Bummer.

Yet there is good news. My children helped me sort through the “run over” paperwork when we got home. I determined I’d only edited 96 of the 220 pages. Of the 96 pages, I only lost 17. So not all of my work went down the road. My hope is that I’ll be able to recall my ideas and critiques when I look over those 17 pages. Things could’ve been worse. After all, I was chasing manuscript pages as wind blew them from my grasp. I nearly lost them. Which means my novel came very close to needing its title changed from Maddie Jones & the Curse of the Terracotta Warriors to Gone with the Wind.

Advertisements

Big Accomplishment Today!

Wow, the Holidays got the best of me I’m afraid. I’ve been slacking on my blog posts. I blame video games. Yep, during my two-week break for Christmas vacation, I played games instead of devoting time to write. And you know what? I don’t even feel guilty about it. Writing is a huge part of my life. I’m not the type of writer who won’t return to my projects if I skip out on a few sessions here and there–or in my case, for a couple weeks. Nope–now that I’m getting back into the groove of school and work, writing has picked back up, too.

So what does that mean?

Well, it means I’m back to writing on a regular basis–writing every day, even if it’s only a sentence or two. That also means I’m back to keeping up with things here as well. But what’s the big accomplishment this blog post’s title alludes to?

I finished the first draft of Maddie Jones & the Curse of the Terracotta Warriors. The novel comes in at a smooth 50,000-words, and I’m excited to say the story is a fast-paced thriller. However, I have a lot of edits, rewrites, and plot holes to work on. Plus I’ll need to recruit test readers, and then rewrite some more. Although the first draft is finished, I still have a couple more months with the project before I’ll feel it’s ready to be seen by literary agents.

I’ll keep you posted along the way. In the meantime, I wanted to share another big accomplishment. A second agent has requested the manuscript for Medical MECH. This agent represents New York Times bestselling authors, too. She emailed me yesterday to let me know she’s received the manuscript, and is looking forward to reading my pages. I’ve got my fingers crossed for a YES for representation…and if not…I’ll keep trying.

Update on Literary Agent Challenge: 50 agents down, and one has requested the manuscript

Publishing Contract

Hey everyone! As many of you know I embarked on a 100 literary agent challenge back in September. The challenge–to send query letters and sample chapters to 100 agents over the course of 100 days. The goal–to secure an agent for my latest young adult novel, Medical Mech. So how has it gone? Well…

Good and bad.

The bad comes from the simple fact that I’ve received about 15 rejections. The agents who said No cited that the project doesn’t fit with what they are looking for. Or they liked the story’s premise, but didn’t feel enough of a connection with my writing to make them jump on board. Some rejections have been simple, most copy and pasted from author to author. Only one rejection was personal:

Dear Mark, 

Many thanks for giving me a chance to get to know your work. For a rocker chick like myself, there is so much to love about the premise of this story. But in the end, I did not come away with total conviction regarding my ability to successfully represent this work in its present form. Therefore, I must pass for now. 

If you decide to refine and refine the story, I would be honored to take a look at the best version you have to share. I would suggest you tighten up those important moments so they read effortlessly like the riffs we both know and love. Right now, they’re a little clunky, and too many of your passages will be lost in translation. However, something tells me you’ll be able to slide toward that sweet song you’re hearing in your head, 

Best wishes as you continue to travel the road to successful publication. I look forward to seeing more from you. Rock on! 

Always, 

Terrie 

Although Terrie rejected my novel, I was thrilled she responded in such a helpful way. I emailed her back to thank her for giving my work quality attention. I also asked if she could share what areas she found clunky. No reply yet. Fingers crossed she’ll respond. And if not, no biggie–I’m know she’s super busy.

There’s another bad, too.

I haven’t been successful in sending out query letters every day. I know–that’s part of the challenge. But the Holidays hit, and I found it hard to keep up with the demand of researching agents and sending out my work. So I’ve decided to modify the challenge, because failure isn’t an option. Now I’m sending queries every day, and if I miss a day, big deal, I’ll get the next agent tomorrow. For some people, “getting to it tomorrow” could destroy their progress. But not for me. I’ll reach my goal of 100 agents, one way or another.

At this point, you’re probably wondering: So what’s the good news? Let me stop grinning long enough to tell you…Yesterday an agent requested the manuscript! I know, right? Super exciting. Now, I know a request does not mean representation. But after receiving nothing but rejections, having one agent do the exact opposite made my day. Even if they say No in the end, I consider this a small victory. I made progress in the right direction! Fingers crossed the agent likes what he reads. And if not…

There’s always another agent tomorrow.

New Medical MECH Fan Art!

Medical MECH Fan Art -- Axel, Jazz, & Lizzy (art by Andrea).JPG

Medical MECH has a wonderful cast of characters–from Riley, the thirteen-year-old hero of the story, to TV Boy, a towering red robot who enjoys Starbucks coffee. Among my favorite are Axel, Jazz, and Lizzy. They’re a gang of misfit musicians who arrive mysteriously in Riley’s small town of Wood Dale, Illinois. What’s their connection with Medical MECH?

You’ll have to read the book to find out.

In the meantime, enjoy this fan art from a student of mine named Andrea. She is super talented and I’m stoked to see my characters come to life!

Douglas debuts latest novel, ‘Medical MECH’

I’m excited to finally announce that Medical MECH is now available to the general public! An article was written in our local paper, The News Herald. Check out the article HERE.

Medical MECH follows the story of 13-year-old Riley Davis as he attempts to stop a robot invasion from destroying his town. He discovers that the only way to defeat the machines is with music, and his bass guitar works best. But Riley will need the help of a punk rocker and her gang of misfit musicians if he is to succeed.

Medical MECH is great for all ages! Written for middle grades, the story has been field tested by kids…and, wow, do they approve. The eBook is available for only $1.99. The paperback is $9.99.

Buy your copy NOW by clicking on THIS LINK or the picture below!

Medical MECH - Kindle Cover

New book hits tomorrow at the CON

New Book - Medical MECH

That’s right, folks. Medical MECH will be out in force at Creative Con all weekend long. If you’ve got nothing to do, head over to the Panama City Marina Civic Center and join the fun. There will be cosplay, celebrities, authors, filmmakers, artists, contests and gaming. And that’s just scratching the surface. Head over to Creative Con’s website to check it all out. Make sure you stop by my table if you visit. I’d love to see you there.

Creative Con

Twelve agents down. One has responded…

Publishing Contract

If you’ve followed my blog over the last couple weeks, you would have seen I’m currently undertaking a literary challenge. The challenge isn’t a competition, nor one I’ve joined with a group to achieve. It’s one I’ve given myself. Here’s the goal–to contact 100 literary agents in 100 days. I started twelve days ago. I’ve sent twelve queries. And guess what? One has responded.

Believe it or not, the agent who contacted me back is none other than Nancy Gallt. She represents blockbuster author Rick Riordan, of Percy Jackson & the Olympians fame. I honestly didn’t expect to hear back from her, and she was the first agent I queried on day one of my challenge. What did she say?

Well, she said no. Bummer. But I had no grand delusions that she would represent my work. I figured someone who represents an author like Rick is extremely selective. Although I knew in my heart she would say no, I tried anyway. When I got her reply–which was nice, by the way–it kind of sucked the wind out of me. I’m not even sure why, knowing my chances. But nonetheless it didn’t feel the greatest. Being told you’re not good enough never is.

Regardless, I’m not giving up. I still have another 99 potential rejections to go. Or, as the case may be, no responses at all. But you know what? It only takes one to say yes. Am I optimistic? You know it. Am I passionate about storytelling? Absolutely. And that’s why I won’t quit, no matter what. I believe my  novels will make it to a bigger audience–one day–and persistence is key.

At least that’s what I keep telling myself.